She

Just an independent thought

Everyone kill her so much

That

Dying has become her way of

Living...

Author's Note

Any grammatical errors? How's it?

Reviews

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

It's a beautiful idea, beautifully executed. Here are a few bits I was wondering about-

Everyone kill her so much
Shouldn't it be killed?

And the spelling of dying needs to be revised.

Otherwise a beautiful poem.

Love,
Vasilees

[Shasha]

That's what I was also wondering. But you know, it should be in present, like killing every moment. And 'dyeing' I wrote because it was in suggestions. Thank you for correcting! And thank you very much for reading and reviewing....