Caged soul

Caged soul

A Poem by Shasha

People say you will never return,
But I have some great memories,
Which have chained you,
Which will never let your soul be free,
You are caged in my heart.

© 2017 Shasha


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Shasha
Tell me what do you think? Any mistake? If yes, please let me know and yes thank you for giving your precious time and reading my poem.

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So relatable. I liked the way you expressed your feelings.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shasha

7 Years Ago

Oh, thank you, Saher! I am pleased that you liked it!!!
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

I am glad I came across this poem. You are most welcome.
Superb, memories are an interesting way to link to someone and this is a unique concept written here, wonderfully done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shasha

7 Years Ago

Oh, thank you very much my friend. Pleased to listen that you liked it!!!
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Taz
This is short but so powerful it says so much is just five lines yet people everywhere have whole conversations at all, I really think it is amazing what came come out of any poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shasha

7 Years Ago

Oh, it's really nice.
Taz

7 Years Ago

Music makes me happy in general :)
Shasha

7 Years Ago

Same here! Music washed away the soul.
I STRICTLY LIKE RHYMING WORDS BUT I HAVE NOT FIND IT IN THESE LINES

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vasilees Sybissyl

7 Years Ago

I am, actually, doing my job. It is my job to stop people from spreading hate, especially unnecessar.. read more
writ rajat

7 Years Ago

Let me spread love ,
From the Earth's core to sky above ,
I want every one to be lovea.. read more
writ rajat

7 Years Ago

Don't be greedy behind love
love the idea of you admitting your own authority in the situation! its beautiful, and a little sinister :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Izzy Bridles for reading and reviewing my writing...
Izzy Briles

7 Years Ago

Absolutely! keep doing what you're doing!
Shasha

7 Years Ago

Oh thank you...
It's pretty sad. Well written, but the idea it conveys is pretty sad. I mean, keep all the memories you want, they're important, but learn to move on. If you keep mourning over a person, they won't ever truly be set free, which means they'll be caged to this land and never be able to move on. Move on, Shasha. Write something happy. It'll be refreshing for you too.
Love,
Vasilees.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shasha

7 Years Ago

I got your point. I'll try. Thanks for your review.
Vasilees Sybissyl

7 Years Ago

That's my job, ain't it, sis?
Shasha

7 Years Ago

Yup! It is.

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Added on March 2, 2017
Last Updated on March 2, 2017
Tags: Emotions, memories, soul, heart

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Shasha
Shasha

Where there are many voices but one sound, the country of love, India



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