This is short but so powerful it says so much is just five lines yet people everywhere have whole conversations at all, I really think it is amazing what came come out of any poem.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much Taz. I am so glad that you liked my poem. Thank you for gifting me with a smile... read moreThank you very much Taz. I am so glad that you liked my poem. Thank you for gifting me with a smile...
7 Years Ago
You are very welcome.
7 Years Ago
I am listening to Footloose so... I am kinda happy lol.
I STRICTLY LIKE RHYMING WORDS BUT I HAVE NOT FIND IT IN THESE LINES
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Hmm, Maybe...
7 Years Ago
Well, it's not important for poems to have rhyming words, and anyways, the poem is beautiful without.. read moreWell, it's not important for poems to have rhyming words, and anyways, the poem is beautiful without them. And could you please not type all in block? It's really offensive and irritating. And change your comment, it should be found, not find. Please, keep your hate to yourself and spread love and strictly constructive criticism.
- Vasilees
7 Years Ago
You do your job I do my job I will never appreciate your mind status I think that you had not seen a.. read moreYou do your job I do my job I will never appreciate your mind status I think that you had not seen authors note above author want anything what the reviewer think about this poem be appreciator and critisizer both let me tell you that you cannot change the like the world you want
I am, actually, doing my job. It is my job to stop people from spreading hate, especially unnecessar.. read moreI am, actually, doing my job. It is my job to stop people from spreading hate, especially unnecessary hate.
Please, I do not even want you to appreciate my, I quote, "mind status." I think it is you who did not read the Author's Note, she asked you to find mistakes, not insults.
Yes, I cannot "change the world like" I want, but I can try to educate the uneducated, and I'm doing my level best.
I repeat, keep your hate to yourself and spread love.
P.s. - Thanks for stopping typing in block.
Vasilees
7 Years Ago
Let me spread love ,
From the Earth's core to sky above ,
I want every one to be lovea.. read moreLet me spread love ,
From the Earth's core to sky above ,
I want every one to be loveable ,,
Make love an asset which is moveable .
Vasilees is the love distributor,
We should make her our tutor
It's pretty sad. Well written, but the idea it conveys is pretty sad. I mean, keep all the memories you want, they're important, but learn to move on. If you keep mourning over a person, they won't ever truly be set free, which means they'll be caged to this land and never be able to move on. Move on, Shasha. Write something happy. It'll be refreshing for you too.
Love,
Vasilees.