I want u there

It's a poem related to a persons who is so devastated In present about his or her situation that he just don't want any help from any body. But he/ she is optimistic for future.

'I want you there'

Don't try to make me laugh ,
Leave me alone to cry,
Give me some space to think ,
Let me realise my mistake ,
Don't help me to overcome my fear,
Leave me as I am lying here,
Give me my chance to breath,
Let me do my own care,
Don't make me feel helpless ,
Leave me to walk away far,
Give me some time alone ,
Let me to quit the war ,
Don't show me your solicitude
,Give me some moment to conclude ,
Leave me ,to live my past,
Let me think ,when I smiled last ,
Don't regret on my condition ,
Give me some thought freedom ,
Leave me to make my opinion,
Let me do what is my final decision ,
Don't run around me to hold on ,
Give me, my free fall on ground,
Leave me lonely ,for self harm
Let me show you my new stand ,
Don't love me ,beyond my belief,
Give me some days of grief ,
Leave me ,with my sorrows and tears,
Let me sleep in dark ,with my fears ,
Don't teach me with your advice,
Give me a try ,to yell by choice,
Leave me ,single ,scratching my face,
Let me erase ,all my beauty and grace,
But !my dear ,
Don't go so far ,
Because it's my war,
Leave me for doing things by my own ,
Let me fight alone ,
One day I will raise my voice,
One day I will take a stand,
One day hope will shine ,
That day will be mine,
And on that day I will need you,
To laugh, to hold, to love, to care,
On that day I want you there,
On that day I will be there .
Written by Shanu Priya

Author's Note

It's my first poem. So I would love to listen your views.

Reviews

[Shanupriya]

It's my first poem so it's hard for me to understand what's wrong or right. It's just my feeling.

[Kpriya]

Great as usual
Felt same from ur journey of your hindi poem to hindi poem
I hv stolen ur poems many times
But really I hv learn alot frm ur poems
Stay happy
Work hard
World is urs

[Pal Satyender]

Awesome.. so much hidden talent... just to review it, i had to login on a portal where i don't belong. Hahahaha..
Don't try to be so hard on yourself
Give a chance to life
Leave all the problems in a trash can
Let try to enjoy every bit n piece of life.
Written by ME
Hahahahaha

[Abhi]

Loved it, full of emotions and happy ending.
Too long but its worth it. Keep on going, post few more, show ur talent.

[Shanupriya]

Thanks for ur points.i would love to write a short poem for u.