Stay

For my best friend.

My heart is rapidly thumping,
Can you feel its beat?
Its because of you,
And everytime we meet.
I see your face,
and I feel myself smile.
Will you do me a favor,
And stay for awhile?

Reviews

[khalid]

need for the lover to stay and we feeling cant let them go is so much expressed here. i really like it

[nightsun]

Yes. I stay to fill the herat, the body, the whole your human being. Because when you give, you receive. And this circle fills us with divinity.

[Distant horizons]

Again, for such a short piece, everything said without fuss. Excellent.