Black sin

Black sin

A Poem by Shanny

He was mourning my death

Holding rotten blade

Killing everlasting hate

Opening my gashes

Turning life into ashes

But today

Im just killing myself

© 2014 Shanny


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Nice use of words. Direct and honest. Sometime we can fall into the wrong places and actions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shanny

10 Years Ago

Really thank you for your review..sometimes we fall into the wrong places in mind and soul,,,;)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. I love your poetry.

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Added on September 3, 2014
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Shanny
Shanny

Krakow, Poland



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