Blood And Rose

Another world behind me

another tear on my face

Smiles which rise and fall

Bloodshot eyes betray my soul

Another dream to have

Another scream for death

Pain to be washed over my soul

Bleeding rose in my hand

Her scent I can't stand

Dark path where my creed lies

Forgotten love 'n' night which dies

My God brings me relieve

and helps me believe

Overweak overcollapse

to hold the rose once more

overgloomy overdiscouraged

to drink blood from her core

Heart beats with hope

from my world can't elope

I wreak havoc on heaven

Painted in black the white raven

Something is lost

and makes me so blind

It is over my strength

It is beneath my mind

The rose is growing

In the garden of Gods

Crimson waterfall's falling

what am I doing?

I'm dying drinking blood..

Reviews

[CrimsonShinigami]

It's a well thought out poem you work is very interesting it's very good

[micky]

Amazing piece you had me hooked since the first line. Well done ;p

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writers. The poem strong statement led me to deep thoughts and places.
"The rose is growing
In the garden of Gods
Crimson waterfall's falling
what am I doing?
I'm dying drinking blood.."
I liked the closing lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote