My whole life in one line

Echos can not break, what is broken. 

Author's Note

http://youtu.be/AFmkjBqkloA

Reviews

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Tonight I was wondering about the picture you had posted as a profile one, while I was watching the movie I told you about, Johnny Depp was playing in that one too.... now here, I see the brilliance, and lonelyness through one beautiful, and meaningful sentence. I understand what you mean with this one.

Once so broken, it's broken, and nothing seems to be possible to repair in this one, the music is great, and I get flash-backs, of every secene of that movie... Do you see yourself like him? I wonder, I mean profoundly? (if so, you have the most beautiful soul). Gentle and intelligent... creative, and alone...

A good piece of writing, this line, says much to me.

- Elisa

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

It seems my words cannot hide me from everyone.

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

Dear gotta say that video on Author's note isn't working.
Good phrase!

[Praveeta]

One line says it all about shattered dreams. Simplicity at its best.

[Vidya Bacchus]

A beautiful somewhat sad line about yourself.Profound, the world I have realized are made up of more broken people than whole ones so you are not alone:P

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

and so we should all fall perfectly together..but we fist have to cast ourselves

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is true my friend:)

[Jack...]

Wonderfully stated sadness.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

Thank you very much!

[annabellee]

you say so much with just one sentence.
kudos to you!

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

thank you annabellee

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[sharonlee]

Profound thought Shane... thought provoking as well....

[Yellow Butterfly]

Great words of wisdom that is concise and very well said in such few words....

Life does not repeat itself exactly but it is definitely full of echoes.... we live so that we can learn from one another...

You're poetry is growing on me Shane.. :)

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I hope only to help you :) before I burn out finally

[Sami Khalil]

Short but a powerful summation...Bravo...................