Forewarned of an occasion, figures prepare for the coming storm. They have foretaste of this experience. An event that inspires awe is now a little more formal. Just for one moment, These figures are not repressed.
Once the storm started, an age was spent in Denial of its effects; There was no denying this storm now, it had gained too much notice. Looking away was now pointless , Even the shadows distorted in fear. The world around entered a flux.
The storms height hit A pressure point; The figures sheltered was cracked. A single drop trickles down. In this rarefied confusion a figure said "It depletes as it flows and will end at a point, this drop does not transcend us" "Yes it is transparent". At the drops point they transpire.
This is my kind of poetry. I took 20 poetry and literature classes over the years. Some poetry is easy. Tell you what it want and direct you to the point. Some poetry is like this poem. I saw the storms. I saw storms of violence and war. Sadness and disappointment. Nature is a fine teacher of life. Can't stop a great storm. Can we stop the storm of hate? Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you! I like your ability to understand how illusive my poetry is! These reviews are validatin.. read moreThank you! I like your ability to understand how illusive my poetry is! These reviews are validating!
I enjoyed this poem, enigmatic and flowing much like the storm it depicts. Thanks for the share. You should be aware however of a minor typo "gained to much notice" You used the wrong to, it should be too.
its a lovely poem truly represents how we have to go through phases difficult ones even knowing they would come with a hope that a time they would end .!! great work.!
We all have to be prepared for the unforseen and forseen storms on the horizon of our lives or we will be caught in their devastating wake...Bravo................
This poem is timely - with the crazy weather in the States, and the stuff we are getting here we haven't seen in decades. I can't help of think of the back talking politicians and their closing the roads. Very clever indeed.
I feel like you may be a meteorologist. :)
You did a great job building the thunder head with this write. Then you finish with the introspective transparency of a raindrop.
To condense or evaporate.... "to resume or revert". A good exploration and a great question.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Why thank you :) Check out more of my work if you like this!