One Thought.One Change.

I realized myself today;
Along bank,road, stone and clay,
As the free birds fly,
The wind whispers 
"do they really know their way".
Beneath there wings,
Unknowns the children play.

My hand lowers down, 
To feel the grass ,
that welcomes my feet;
I see a blossom bloom 
besides new found beat. 
You have to understand, a crimson berry,
can be sour but also sweet  

I gaze upon the prints 
That lead me back to home, 
Slowly a chimney bellows 
that I am not alone;
The canal water drifts away , 
but through my soul it will always stay 
where the darkness meets the light,
and slowly fades away. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"You have to understand, a crimson berry,
can be sour but also sweet "
A lot to ponder in your words. I like the above lines a lot. Some questions we must answer by living and testing the water. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mark]

Very nice portrayal of a walk. I think many problems can be solved simply by taking a half hour to walk and enjoy.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome imagery! A fluid read and great poem.
I liked it!
Great job again!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good imagery and flow. Quite lovely

[Cody Williams]

And interesting write Shane! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[sharonlee]

I found this a tranquil stroll with the natural elements... a topic I write on often.

Nicely crafted

[lilliam]

*their wings.

It's interesting. Throughout your poetry I feel what you're trying to say. I like to meditate on these and try and figure out what's really being said. I'll update you on that. Very pretty imagery, very dark and shadowy.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

This is my favorite type of poetry to write for a reader! I love the thoughts of another person thinking :)

[Angel of Chaos]

This is very descriptive. I can almost feel and see everything as I read it.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery aspects of this :)

[Corset]

quite beautiful, this poem, it has a surreal quality that is both soothing and vibrant.

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

why thank you Corset :)