Tears in the rain

Crying in the rain hides your tears

My Life Is In Pieces,
But I Hold Back The Pain,
Im Hoping...
Waiting -

For the Rain To Fall,
To Have My Skin Shiver..
To Feel Silky..
To Have my Hair Flat..
to Have my Face Hid -

The Rain Ponders In,
My Dark Place..
My Keep Sake..
I Take In THis Feeling...

A Relief..

and -

I Sigh,
And A Tear Places Itself Apon My Cheek,
Hidden With the Rain,
I Let Them Fall..

1..
2..
3...
Looking Into The Black Sky,
I Watch It All Shimmer Away

And -

Inside,
I Become At Ease For Once..
And..
I Think Im Okay..
For the Rest Of That Day.

Author's Note

my writing is bad...haha

Reviews

[HermitsUnited]

I do this sometimes. If it's raining, I'll just take a walk and let it out. Rain is a beautiful thing! I respect the rain more than most anything.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Your use of imagery is good! :-)

[Elizabeth Marie]

Ur writing isn't bad it flowed like a stream...

[WriterMe]

This was a nice read. Nah, it wasnt bad. Rain = love.

[Hello, Goodbye]

If feels really nice to read something and feel as if you are seen a secret place of someone's mind and feelings.. thanks.

[deeps]

Wow! Now this is just plain wonderful! This is not bad! I find it wonderful. You are quite apowerful writer.
You express yourself wonderful.

[Impulse]

I think this really describes how some people feel. Most of us hide our emotions and only let them out when we're sure no one can see them. It's always good to have someone to share our feelings with. I enjoyed the truth in this piece. Overall it has a great flow. Excellent =]