My Own Perfection

This is all true..

 

The way she smiles,every little look

even if its annoyance,

it makes me happy just to see her beautiful face.

She can be crazy at times,

fun and outgoing, always a pleasure to be with.

The way she lays her head against my shoulder,

it makes me feel like I have a responsibility,

to comfort her, even if she's the happiest she's ever been.

When she laughs, it brightens up my world,

even in the darkest times.

To talk to her about

memories,problems or whatever

for hours on end

makes me feel so good.

When she is sad,

All of my attention focuses to her,

making sure I can do all I can

to make her cheery again.

The way she hugs me,

it can cure any injury at any time,

mental or physical.

The way she kisses me,

well, I cannot describe it fully,

you need to experience it

to believe how amazingly wonderful it is.

You see, people do not see what I see.

My eyes have been opened, and I see

the most perfect individual god placed upon this earth.

And, he gave her heart to me? This, my friends,

is a blessing I will never throw away.

Reviews

[charlotte talley]

this is so beautiful, the way you describe how the person meant to you. yea, I would say this is a great write.

[Deepshikha]

Wow, I must say, that's is very emotion-filled. It could also make quite an awesome song too. ^_^ Nice write!

[Rosary]

I have to admit being held by someone you love is the greatest feeling ever
my advice is its a good read but theres a little more you couid do with the structure and fitting the words together but it is a very good poem that shows genuine passion for love and i wouldnt change that