Almost paradise

My version of paradise..NOT an erotic

On the beach,

swinging in a hammock

with the sun on my face.

Surfboard by my side,

dug in the warm sand

Sunset overhead.

Drinks galore,

surfing waves,coming back,

drying out in the sun and going back again.

At the end of the day, eating dinner

up on a balcony overlooking the beach..

You'd think this is my place, my paradise

But it is missing an important part..

My true paradise?

At home in Pittsburgh PA,

spending time with those special to me,

or rather,

the one girl that's special to me..

That to me,

is 100 times better than a day in that supposed paradise

Author's Note

Wanted to get that out, tell me what you thinj

Reviews

[-!katie!-]

i love it (:

it's amazing (:

[Becca :)]

that's good. i like your use of imagery in the beginning part. nice work. =]