Inner Beast

Trying 2 be more..poetic?

This creature..this monster

It is braking free,

I can't control it much longer

It whispers,

"They deserve this. Make them Pay."

And its unclear of what is right, and

what is wrong on this day.

My loved ones start to fear me,

and it all comes tumbling down.

One by one they leave me,

when she leaves,

I will give it the crown.

It shall be my ruler,

No longer will I be the man you once knew..

an animal for the rest of time,

wreaking havock, no hope, no cause

So please, help me, don't let me fall

To my inner beast

 

Author's Note

Tell me..am i meant to write poems? Or is it not even worth it?

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a very good poem, something we are all afraid of I believe,
our own inner beast. You have strength, it shows in your words, that
is your faith...AD

[.:LiSa!:.]

i like it, rly

[-!katie!-]

This is really good!
NOT LYING. so don't say it.
I like it a lot.
and it's very well written
the emotion is well expressed
good job!
( It's in your genes, even if you don't believe me )