Life Blood

I stood over a bridge, and cut my stomach open with a dull knife.
I allowed its contents to pour into the still water below.
Upon impact they created a ripple.
This crimson stained ripple traveled several feet before settling on a near-by bank.
My blood stained the earth on that bank.
After many years the blood stained earth vegetated.
Many animals where given sustenance from that vegetation.
I died on that bridge.
These animals live on.

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[Hedra Helix]

vegetation, man there was a huge blind spot in my brain;)

[Hedra Helix]

I like this alot too,

old school edit:


I stood over a bridge, and cut my stomach open with a dull knife.
I allowed its contents to pour into the still water below.
Upon impact they created a ripple.
This crimson stained ripple traveled several feet before settling on a near-by bank.
My blood stained the earth on that bank.
After many years the blood stained earth vegetated.
Many animals where given sustenance from that vegitation.
I died on that bridge.
These animals live on.


spelling, vegitation is still wrong, i couldn't figure it out;) gave up easy, 2 sleepy