Heart Ardency

         Heart Ardency

              You stay with behind

              Outside of the invisible wall

              Do hide-and-seek with deep of heart

              You caught by asleep heart

                  Heart stay with swing

                  And attach with dreadful Sea

                  Its lost every time

                  That's adjust with endless world

            Run with paceful air

            In very far with paradise

            As like glowing Star

            With clamour gather fair

                  I feel many expectation in heart

                 That's adjust with heart elegance

                  Lighting with Lamp of love

                  In your closed heart.

Reviews

[Emilie Louise]

There is a lot of emotion in this poem which I feel is very powerful, it's really good

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

Thank you.....D!!!

[Emilie Louise]

your welcome :D

[Emilie Louise]

just telling the truth :D

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

okay>>>>>>>>

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

I think, everybody come with me alone....

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

just okay.. At first i realized many things...then,finally many romantic poem waiting for all...

[quinfinn]

you should post more of your art, it speaks to me without swerving all over the road
as some poets do....welcome to wc

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

I have thousands of poem.I didn't add my all writing......okay

[quinfinn]

good, looking forward to reading more

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

I think,If anybody write Something,feelings must need their.If,it's possible Your writing also attract everybody.okay

[PokemonFan#1]

I lovez this! So much feeling and emotions. A great and beautiful poem.

Keep it up!
=^-^=

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

okay..Thank you.