Heart Ardency

Heart Ardency

A Poem by Shamsuddin Mazed

         Heart Ardency

              You stay with behind
              Outside of the invisible wall
              Do hide-and-seek with deep of heart
              You caught by asleep heart


                  Heart stay with swing
                  And attach with dreadful Sea
                  Its lost every time
                  That's adjust with endless world


            Run with paceful air
            In very far with paradise
            As like glowing Star
            With clamour gather fair


                  I feel many expectation in heart
                 That's adjust with heart elegance
                  Lighting with Lamp of love
                  In your closed heart.

© 2012 Shamsuddin Mazed


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There is a lot of emotion in this poem which I feel is very powerful, it's really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emilie Louise

12 Years Ago

your welcome :D
Emilie Louise

12 Years Ago

just telling the truth :D
Shamsuddin Mazed

12 Years Ago

okay>>>>>>>>
I think, everybody come with me alone....

Posted 12 Years Ago


just okay.. At first i realized many things...then,finally many romantic poem waiting for all...

Posted 12 Years Ago


you should post more of your art, it speaks to me without swerving all over the road
as some poets do....welcome to wc

Posted 12 Years Ago


Shamsuddin Mazed

12 Years Ago

I have thousands of poem.I didn't add my all writing......okay
quinfinn

12 Years Ago

good, looking forward to reading more
I think,If anybody write Something,feelings must need their.If,it's possible Your writing also attract everybody.okay

Posted 12 Years Ago


I lovez this! So much feeling and emotions. A great and beautiful poem.

Keep it up!
=^-^=

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

okay..Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 15, 2012
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Shamsuddin Mazed
Shamsuddin Mazed

Dhaka, South, Bangladesh



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