Cloud

So many things are going wrong in my life, shattering my plans and I'm dealing with things, a storm, that wasn't supposed to come just yet.

Sky once so clear

Blue, my heart at a joyful dash

Then suddenly a cloud appears

Blocking out my radient sun, raining down shards of glass, they crash

Into me, my skin

Tearing to shreds my sanity, my body, my heart

A jolt of pain and hurt to something within

The shards destroy all, how did this all start?

Spring air, the forecast was a lie

"Happy weather, fine day", in what way?

An illusion set by those I trust.  I try

To dodge the attacking slices of perfectly crafted hate

Meant to pierce me, hurt me

Reach a house, my shelter but it's too late

I've been destroyed by what I once loved, not what it was supposed to be

All a deceitful trick of the mind, it was never spring time

All a ploy to me, to fool me, no happiness is solid

One cloud is all it takes to wipe away all that I love, bring back all that I dread

Reviews

[Gheeneil]

Sometimes things take its swift twist just when we start feeling comfortable with life. I like this line:

"Meant to pierce me, hurt me...it was never spring time"

Spring means death and to feel death before spring comes is very frightening. I think that line is just powerful!