Blue

Blue

A Poem by BodilessSoul

You are my calm

The shelter from

the dark storm

A breath of

fresh air-

A murmur of

sweet water

How do you do it-

Do it to me?

You are my sadness

A black abyss

in my soul

A suffication from

horrid air-

A scream of

anger and cruelty

How do you do it-

Do it to me?

You are a wave of emotion

I can never control

A splash of

color-

An ever constant

hue of

Lovely tragedy

You are my blue

© 2009 BodilessSoul


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That was a very cool poem,you really pulled me in with the flow and the ending I felt was very powerfull.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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BodilessSoul
BodilessSoul

LarlarLand, FL



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