Bland love

I challenge myself to write a poem in less than 2 minutes and this what I got, Needs editing.

Love is something odd

Love can't be described

I tried to express how much I loved you and caught myself realizing it's like describing how water tastes

There isn't enough words for such an emotion

a connection

a pull with many alternations

Love is danger

Love is fire

I smoked it on and choked half way

coughed, struggled, and breathed in the bitter bland air that life is without you

Reviews

[Richard]

it's really good yes I enjoyed that :)

[Shalaika G.]

Thank you so much :)