Christmas Eve

ok so this was a poem that i wrote for english class last year...it took me about five minutes tops to write it...so tell me what you think! lol

I was walking along one Christmas Eve

When I suddenly ran into my long lost cousin Steve

He said "Hello!"

I said "Goodbye!"

Then he invited me over for some Christmas pie!

I said "Yes!"

How could I resist?

I came home late and my mother was.............

mad.

=D

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

Nice...
Very peaceful and simple...
I like it, good work...