Promises

Promises

A Poem by Shai

Light unfolds around you
sleepily awake,
I can see it clearly
the smile upon his face.

His dimples hide my secrets.
His lips hold my last song.
I can not remember
where everything went wrong.

I pull my wishes tightly,
around me as I sleep.
His arms are only ashes.
His words, a memory.

- Shai (June 16, 2013)

© 2013 Shai


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This is beautiful! Its very dreamy and has the wishful, romantic touch that makes it warm and memorable.
You have great potential, and I can't wait to read more :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Shai

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Maxine :)

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Added on June 19, 2013
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