Wish to discover the half pie

Wish to discover the half pie

A Poem by Shahanaz
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In our world there are infinite things to discover but our life is so short.

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We are in exciting space

Many way we grab and take advantages

Many places we did not step in

Many spaces we are imagining

Digging in but still

could not find the core

Busted out could not

limit space explore

Half (1/2) of lifetime is occupied

Even though active life part

is not always  ....... 

Exciting present need to exchange

But half of life is not

Nearly enough to achieve our goal

"Whatever due we do, 

but wish to have another way 

double our life value."

© 2015 Shahanaz


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Shahanaz
Shahanaz

mississauga, Ontario, Canada



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