New Spring New Hope

This poem really works on the idea of change and new beginnings. Additionally, focusing on how beautiful this process can be.

Slowly river flows, 

Nicely breeze blows, 

Flowers surrounding area.

Birds are singing, 

Animals and insects are awakening, 

Which hints spring is here! 

Spring is here.

After cold long winter

Wash away old, bad nature

New born, new hopes, 

Message fresh new start.

Wise wisdoms wish lighten

Our new path.

Author's Note

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Are there better words that i can be using instead?
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Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Ahhhh loved the changes in the writing's color just as much as the season's change to Spring! Poetry that sings.