Innocence

Innocence

A Poem by Shadows Ember

There is this thing about innocence.
It comes from a look,
a smile, 
or even a tone of voice.

Though, in reality,
things may not be as they seem.

The sweetest angel may be dripping in darkness.
While the darkest of them all could be in the brightest of smiles.

And honey,
Innocence can be destroyed in a matter of seconds......So BEWARE.

© 2014 Shadows Ember


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This is such a truthful piece I really love this one Ember:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The blue you chose for this piece is so calming and sweet, probably the best color you could have chosen for innocence since white wouldn't show up on a white screen. Followed by the red ending was a good touch because it catches the readers attention and makes them wonder what exactly you're saying even though it's right there in black and white - okay blue and white, but you get what I'm saying lol.

I like the personality of this piece and they way you formatted it to be something so different from your usual works. Interesting use of your inspiration and well penned. Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very true! The sweetest might be the darkest. Looks are surely deceptive..!
A very creative creation indeed! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Shadows Ember
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My name is Ember. i am 17. Senior in high school, and I love to write, especially romance stories and poems. I'm not an expert so bear with me. My favorite author is most definitely Edgar Allen Poe. I.. more..

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