Pain

How could you?

How could you possibly leave me
in the time I need you most...
Can you not see the hole in my chest 

that I am trying so desperately to hide?

I just wish you would realize the importance

that you have in my life.

Please,

just come back to me...

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

This is a very good poem, very direct/ straight foward. I love it!

It its well written!

Thank you for sharing

~Suk

[Louise.xx]

Powerful, poignant and very emotive. It oozes feeling and is very well penned xx

[The Nude Writer]

Deep pain we all know about. Well written

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I wasnt even there to ask you why you wrote this and i already know who its about and what you mean. i know blue has an importance, but I cant figure out what you wanted to accomplish with it. I love the way you started it with nothing but a question. I love that it ends with such an honest comment, how you truly want nothing more than for him to come back. The way you penned this is beautiful. Great job.