Six words

Six words

A Poem by Shadows Ember

You Said
Forever,

You lied.

© 2014 Shadows Ember


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So short! LOL BUT SO POWERFUL...

I love it

thank you for sharing

~SUK

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

impressive#
Say many things & it can fit up into many stories#

Posted 10 Years Ago


Words people hear a lot. You know how they say pictures are worth a thousand words? Well, you probably just described a million pictures at everyone's some point in life with those six words. Simplicity will always be my favorite thing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the colors and the short
use of words very nicely done BRAVO!


Thank you for sharing.


Blessings. Benita

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! Fantastic use of the word limit.
Speaks the truth of a hundred words

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like the format of this piece and the style you chose. For only being able to use six words you not only had to be careful but you had to do something to make it pop and stand apart from all the other six word entries. I love this though, not only is it beyond incredibly true and something everyone understands, but the colors have meaning too, I like that. Nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Shadows Ember
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My name is Ember. i am 17. Senior in high school, and I love to write, especially romance stories and poems. I'm not an expert so bear with me. My favorite author is most definitely Edgar Allen Poe. I.. more..

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