The Way Out

Lurking in the shadows
Youll never find your way
Giving into darkness only
Feeds the pain.
You never know if tomorrow
Will bring rain or sorrow
But still
Sometimes even when
Youre lost in the darkest part
Of woods you can
See the rays of
Sunlight on the
Branches. That, my
Friend, is your
Way out

Reviews

[RaeStems]

I love this and how it uses imagery to portray a sense of hope.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another angst related verse but with a hopeful message. Flows well and again provokes thought.

[Aiden Christopher Paffo..]

This one sends chills up my spine. I could. Feel. The urgency in this. Piece. Great. Job.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I like this piece, there is a very simple feel to it and yet your point gets across well and your theme is well developed. I think it would fit better in the life category though, if I may say so. Anyway, Awesome write Zoei, the only thing I would suggest is reformatting the piece or trying to give it some "shape". Because right now just being words sort of distracts your flow and makes it a little more difficult for the reader to follow. (I still have this problem from time to time too, or I would suggest a solution.)

Anyway, great write :)