Shadow

Shadow

A Poem by Shadows Ember

Some people say you can't rely on anyone but yourself,
Some people say,"no, trust is to be earned."

Though, 
What they don't realize is that your shadow is always there.
You may not see it, you may not even notice,
But he is there. 
He is with you through it all. 
He keeps you grounded and in control.

Your Shadow,

Is ALWAYS one step behind you in everything you do.

© 2014 Shadows Ember


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This is another nice pithy free verse that makes the reader think. For shaddow read conscience. One gramatical error I think? :
'Some people say no trust is to be earned' Should there be a 'no' in this line?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shadows Ember

10 Years Ago

i purposely put it there. but i should use the grammar. I was in a hurry to post it.
A interesting poem. Many poems about the shadow. I like the flow of thoughts and the way you set-up the ending. I do believe trust must be gained. We do need support and kind friends to know peace. The shadow is a good topic for thoughts and wonder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shadows Ember

10 Years Ago

Why thank you (:
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Well done. You see your spiritual being with this poem. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shadows Ember

10 Years Ago

why thank you
You almost compare your. Shadow with a gaurdian angel in this piece. I love the parallel here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shadows Ember

10 Years Ago

You pinned that perfectly
This is a great poem with a wonderful dedication, I love the way you wrote this one there's a massively well done flow and a great style. Interesting write. Well done. Definitely have a fan out of me :P

Posted 10 Years Ago



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