I can't help but wonder… how you really feel about me. Am I a pawn in your game of life? Or, am I truly important to you? Do you actually care? Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart? What am I to you really? Am I important at all? Am I just a player in this division of your fantasy? Am I truly important? Or, am I just another person in your eyes? Who is the one who owns your heart? Am I the one who is on your mind? Or, am I the one… The one you forget about day to day? I'm full of questions, as you see. All I want is an answer.
Important questions… hard to ask, harder to wait for an answer…
Some minor copy edits I recommend:
I can't help but wonder…
how you really feel about me.
Am I a pawn in your game of life?
Or, am I truly important to you?
Do you actually care?
Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart?
What am I to you really?
Am I important at all?
Am I just a player
in this division of your fantasy?
Am I truly important?
Or, am I just another person in your eyes?
Who is the one who owns your heart?
Am I the one who is on your mind?
Or, am I the one…
The one you forget about day to day?
I'm full of questions, as you see.
All I want is an answer.
Important questions… hard to ask, harder to wait for an answer…
Some minor copy edits I recommend:
I can't help but wonder…
how you really feel about me.
Am I a pawn in your game of life?
Or, am I truly important to you?
Do you actually care?
Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart?
What am I to you really?
Am I important at all?
Am I just a player
in this division of your fantasy?
Am I truly important?
Or, am I just another person in your eyes?
Who is the one who owns your heart?
Am I the one who is on your mind?
Or, am I the one…
The one you forget about day to day?
I'm full of questions, as you see.
All I want is an answer.
My name is Ember. i am 17. Senior in high school, and I love to write, especially romance stories and poems. I'm not an expert so bear with me. My favorite author is most definitely Edgar Allen Poe. I.. more..