What Am I?

What Am I?

A Poem by Shadows Ember

I can't help but wonder…
how you really feel about me.
Am I a pawn in your game of life?
Or, am I truly important to you?
Do you actually care?
Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart?
What am I to you really?
Am I important at all? 
Am I just a player
in this division of your fantasy?
Am I truly important?
Or, am I just another person in your eyes?
Who is the one who owns your heart?
Am I the one who is on your mind?
Or, am I the one…
The one you forget about day to day?
I'm full of questions, as you see.
All I want is an answer.

Is your love still with me?

© 2014 Shadows Ember


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Important questions… hard to ask, harder to wait for an answer…

Some minor copy edits I recommend:
I can't help but wonder…
how you really feel about me.
Am I a pawn in your game of life?
Or, am I truly important to you?
Do you actually care?
Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart?
What am I to you really?
Am I important at all?
Am I just a player
in this division of your fantasy?
Am I truly important?
Or, am I just another person in your eyes?
Who is the one who owns your heart?
Am I the one who is on your mind?
Or, am I the one…
The one you forget about day to day?
I'm full of questions, as you see.
All I want is an answer.

Is your love still with me?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I have been in this place, and I know it is not fun. Or a place anyone should be in. This is a beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shadows Ember

10 Years Ago

Why thank you
I asked myself. The same thing when I was with my ex... In my case I. Was a pawn. This one made me cry a little. Great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is interesting, It has a unique voice to it and a creative style. The emotion is definitely all here. Interesting write

Posted 10 Years Ago


well written Keep it up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Important questions… hard to ask, harder to wait for an answer…

Some minor copy edits I recommend:
I can't help but wonder…
how you really feel about me.
Am I a pawn in your game of life?
Or, am I truly important to you?
Do you actually care?
Or, am I just a passing glance in the window of your heart?
What am I to you really?
Am I important at all?
Am I just a player
in this division of your fantasy?
Am I truly important?
Or, am I just another person in your eyes?
Who is the one who owns your heart?
Am I the one who is on your mind?
Or, am I the one…
The one you forget about day to day?
I'm full of questions, as you see.
All I want is an answer.

Is your love still with me?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shadows Ember
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My name is Ember. i am 17. Senior in high school, and I love to write, especially romance stories and poems. I'm not an expert so bear with me. My favorite author is most definitely Edgar Allen Poe. I.. more..

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