Break Down

It's crazy how I feel like I mean nothing to you.
Did I ever? Or was I just a piece in the puzzle that is your game?
You will never get how much you hurt me, 
How much you're still hurting me...
Every day that goes by I get a step closer
A step closer to losing grip and breaking down.
An escape of reality is what I want, because sadly, 
Reality is too painful to withstand for so long. 
I'm trying to hold on but the weight is overbearing and I am beginning to slip.
Into an abyss of uncertainty.
I don't have the strength to keep holding on to nothing,
But my heart clings for dear life.
If I wait any longer it will be ripped from my chest in the collapse....

Reviews

[Malister Mikey]

I felt these emotions so well, for I have felt this way myself with my ex, it is relatable and very well written. You put a lot of emotion in this piece and that is what makes it good. To escape into a world of fantasy is something that always helps to cope it is a very powerful coping mechanism, though when that world of fantasy comes crashing down what is left can just leave one insane, I really liked this piece you did a very good job on it your truly and Artist Of The Written Word.

[Shadows Ember]

Thank you so much (:

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I really like this, it has an overflow of emotion and a very interesting voice shines here. The word choice is decent and worked well within this piece. Your choice of style was interesting, but it does not really seem to fit what you are saying. maybe if you had some time you could go back and try reformatting this - just a little.