When you miss me...

Just a poem I wrote for my girlfriend to be.

Oh wo do I miss you so!
This world is so cold without your embrace
And every minute without you is filled with woe.
Oh how I miss your love, beauty, and grace.

You have to worry not at all
For you are the world to me.
I'll be there for you, winter, spring, summer, and fall.
We'll always be forever, just you and me.

So have no fears about me
For I have not intention to leave
And my love will always be with thee.
I'll be your Adam, and you'll be my Eve.

I know that you miss me now
Fret not for I miss you too.
I'll find a way to see you, somehow.
The spot in my hear, reserved just for you.

Author's Note

Do forgive me if you think this is unworthy. I am new to poetry and this is my first rhyming writing.

Reviews

truly from the heart! very very good!

[Thoctar]

I like the incredible sense of melancholy, and the feeling of having that one special person away from you and knowing that they will be back soon and that they will still love you and yet feeling scared and worried. Anyway, good poem! I hope to see more in the future. Definitely one I really connected with and I feel most others could as well.

[guiltyascharged]

I love it. It shows how you should trust somebody even though they have felt heartbreak before, they should keep trying and trust you.