Broken Man

Broken Man

A Poem by Cherry
"

This is the story of me and my baby girl....

"

It began like any other day

We walked together in that usual way

I looked into her eyes

I asked her to share stronger ties

 

As weeks went on, we smiled more

Until i was invited inside her door

her mother took one look at me

She instantly made us enemies

 

Later on that day

I looked towards your way

then out of the blue

I leaned over and kissed you

 

it was the greatest feeling i had ever known

in a sign of passion, love was shown

from that point on, it would grow

ur smile would make ur whole face glow

 

One day in June

I looked at you

Your eyes were full of bliss

Little did you know, i wanted more than a kiss

 

Our lips touched for a minute

after a while they spilt

open they went our tongues kissed

then they went into a twist

 

never saw you after that, till summer turned to fall

you wouldnt kiss me in the hall

You pushed me away

we barely talked everyday

 

You said we had changed, you and me

But there is no difference i can see

We give each other passing glances

O how i miss those middle school dances

 

Now i just wanna be friends thats all

yet now my heart hurts, i no longer walk tall

I say i still love you

And you know its true

 

You say you hate me, to me thats new

and here i wonder, what the hell did i do?

I treated you like gold

Now you shoved me away, now my heart is cold

 

I am not strong enough to carry on like this

I miss the days when we used to kiss

My heart is beaten and torn

Now our reltaionship is full of scorn

 

© 2010 Cherry


Author's Note

Cherry
ignore grammar problems please

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wow i felt the pain coming out of the words written....its well written your point came across very clearly!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I have been hurt by the girl i love and i am not strong enough to carry on without the help of others....yet none understand or have the desire to help, they just fill me with false hope. I love writi.. more..

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