PTSD

PTSD

A Poem by Shadowkai
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No one knows...

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No one knows...
The horrors I have seen
Men mowed down
As if it were all just a game 
And we, the pawns
Images of them, still haunt me
I feel as if they, still follow me 
My mind will never be at peace
And they call this PTSD
I say it's Hell 
And it is one I deserve
I cannot replace the lives I've taken
For that, I am sorry
Now leave me be
While I deal with my PTSD

© 2015 Shadowkai


Author's Note

Shadowkai
In Honor of our veterans may they one day find peace.

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Okay, wow. This one thing speaks legions. You couldn't be more wrong about how people with PTSD feel. I would know personally because I have it. This is truly a work of art and I'm really happy to read it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shivers man. Such a powerful poem, so much emotion. You would almost think you know someone with PTSD to be able to write this.

I thought i would check out one of your poems again, but man, you're improving really fast!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shadowkai

9 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend, I am so pleased you still find intrest in my poems, All of yor reviews and eve.. read more
I really enjoyed the concept behind this poem i'd really like to see the piece extended in more depth about PTSD. Thank you for sharing

- ATC

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shadowkai

9 Years Ago

Thank you I will definitely consider doing a follow up to this peace, Thank you again :)

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Added on October 25, 2015
Last Updated on October 25, 2015
Tags: War, PTSD, Suffering

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Shadowkai
Shadowkai

Rochester, NY



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I am a 16 year old writer, i will be posting one to two poems each day. On every Monday i will post additions to "The End of Humanity" and every Wednesday i will add to "Bane of The Darkness". Fridays.. more..

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