Listen to me!

Listen to me, please i must be quick

        I’m here to tell all of you that the monsters we have read about on the internet are real and they have killed my friends. They're still after me.... I have to hide. Please if you’re reading these don’t make the same mistakes we did. I will leave this with an account of what happened to us and what I saw… I couldn’t salvage any of the others. Please be careful and whatever you do stay away from the woods on All Hallows Eve.

These are those who died with our first night in this Hell.

My Friends(May their souls Rest.In.Peace)

Daniel,

Ben,

Brandon,

Josh, 

and Zach

Please read through my records and pay close attention and you will understand how to avoid a fate as worse as ours.

Author's Note

Short I know but it was just meant to introduce my story and i wanted to see what you guys thought about it, please give me honest responses and i'll have part one up in no time. :)

Reviews

[Bear]

nice start to a horror story, interesting way of beginning the story with a list of the dead, I can't recall ever seeing that before so it's an original idea. I see a few wording issues but nothing major, I am sure you will find and fix many small issues with your final edit, I know I always did which is why I never did the final edit myself. When I get time I plan to read the rest of this and will give you my thoughts after I have, it has peeked my interest and that is all any good writer can ask for :~)

[Ana]

I can't believe I'm just now commenting on this! I was gone for the longest time, so I'm it sure if you still write on here, but I know I'm shocked that I didn't see this before. I'm incredibly interested with the beginning I'm almost becoming teary (I have no idea why there must be something wrong with my tear ducts). This is like the start of a movie, and the list of names makes it even more interesting. I definitely want to read more.

[Lavorther]

Chills. The font and the idea of a note are a great way to draw the reader in. I could picture myself in a dark attic, reading this note i found. *shiver*

[Smokey]

Sounds great!
Can't wait to read it!

[HipsterPrincess17]

Yay a new story!

Cant wait to know what happens next!

Your friend
Lia :)