This reminded me of unconditional love. How, no matter how much a person is hurting and how many things they have to deal with...you'll always be there for them. No matter what. Like a, ride or die thing you know. Like, you love them either way!
Really touched by this and I could really relate
Aphy
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I felt the same way a couple of years ago but things went south and that person... died. Its good th.. read moreI felt the same way a couple of years ago but things went south and that person... died. Its good that it can connect to people with or out without losses, I had someone else with me reading it and they thought so.
Ensuring the beloved of the true feelings that the lover has, is so important to secure a continuing relationship, with those words that you expressed here in this fine poem will easily save that relationship. Well done writing those deep emotions.
The poem is sweet. You are saying if you get a girlfriend no matter what happens you will love her and be by her side. People can learn a lot from this poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you and I hope people do learn from this. If we could all think this way think of how much bet.. read moreThank you and I hope people do learn from this. If we could all think this way think of how much better peoples relationships would be, No more drama or arguments over loyalty, because they know you are theirs truly
I liked the strong emotion for the want of love and care.
"I am Yours Forever
Never forget that"
True love is forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
This reminded me of unconditional love. How, no matter how much a person is hurting and how many things they have to deal with...you'll always be there for them. No matter what. Like a, ride or die thing you know. Like, you love them either way!
Really touched by this and I could really relate
Aphy
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I felt the same way a couple of years ago but things went south and that person... died. Its good th.. read moreI felt the same way a couple of years ago but things went south and that person... died. Its good that it can connect to people with or out without losses, I had someone else with me reading it and they thought so.
Man is ever trying to prove himself and what he will endure as testament to his love, I think every poet writes on this topic a few times in their life. I always find it interesting to see how other poets express them self and their emotions. good job, Clap! Clap!
I am a 16 year old writer, i will be posting one to two poems each day. On every Monday i will post additions to "The End of Humanity" and every Wednesday i will add to "Bane of The Darkness". Fridays.. more..