lost love

siting at home missing her

I loved you more than I have ever known
Those starry eyes
Those tender lips
You made my heart melt
Then boil into a roaring fire
I now know
What my eyes could not see
You are the only one that is for me
Many nights those tears flew
Being myself without anyone
Anyone to care about the thoughts
Looking at the sky and knowing
Many mistakes I had
Many mistakes I have had

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Moonflower]

A subtle expression of deep and harrowing pain, Ver well done.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

nicely written~well expressed

[The Warrior Poet]

Regret is an evil burden

[Brad]

one thing we always do, when we've lost someone is give them sainthood...i had lost someone to another and i brooded over it for a long period of time...once almost ending myself...it's a long road to repair...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

so simple a write but i love it

[Kate Hunter]

I love it. It hits really close to home, actually.

[Morgan]

nice

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

I like it

[Norma M Sutton]

Direct and to the point. I like it.

[Ashley]

aww its so cute and such a good flow