Noble Tree

i was givin a chance a a publisher to present writings for cristmas so i figured i would give it a shot let me know what you think thanks ~wolf~

Just like cars we are sold;

standing in lots wait for you to behold.

You bring us home and set us in a corner;

and put hundreds of jewels on our bodys.

A symbol of cristmas you should know;

that we are in fact a tree.

But not just any tree;

a cristmas tree am i indeed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[DannyLynne Riley]

This is really something special... a short write but packs power in volumes.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this made me smile but made me cry, they are like cars being sold....only there are more trees sold over christmas then cars i think lol merry christmas everyone

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow wolf this is the best one yet. i love it

~SK

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. very unique imagery and narrative ... it's a bit sad though ... yet a beautiful christmas tree poem ...

[nothing]

Very good indeed. Another amazing one from Wolf Man. You have the power, my friend. Great write, read, and imagery. And look at me. I think I've fallen for all of these amazing poems. :-)

Sarah.

[Brad]

this makes me want to go out and rip and tear into the flesh of an evergreen tree and suck it's sap like lifesblood............um....sorry, too much coffee this morning

[Tom]

I love poems about Christmas :D No matter what is said, it's just so cheery to me ^_^