Bleeding Heart

I took all of the emotion that i was filling about my ex and utilized it in the making of this poem

Everything about you sickens me;

 

making me queezy every time i think of you.

 

Your love was a lie i cant beleave i trusted you;

 

now I lay here in this dark surcofficus.

 

Forever barried 6 feet under;

 

never to feel the warmth of anothers touch.

 

Your lies have forsaken me;

 

all emotions locked deep within my darkend soul.

 

And my bloody heart torn into millions of peaces;

 

shall never beat again.

 

My love that was a gift to you;

 

and the momment you took his hand;

 

You shatterd all possibilitys of happieness.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy yet another of my poems

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

You express your emotions well. Loss of love is hard, but you will go on.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the heart is bleeding. We have no desire to see someone we lost content. I like the strength in the poem. A very strong ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[The Cute 1]

cool poem i love ir

[T]

Despite spelling errors, a good nasty poem. I can see the frustration you used to create it and I can picture an angel of death hovering over the one who killed her not knowing what horrible fate awaits him. Nice job Wolf.