Never

Never

A Poem by Shadow of Death

I never wanted this.
Never wanted him to understand
My philosophy.
My philosophy where
I don't need others.
I've been hurt too much.
He is broken.
I never wanted this.
He is hurt.
I never wanted him to understand.
And soon, he'll be used to it
Just like I am.
I don't want that.
That never needs to happen.
Never.

© 2015 Shadow of Death


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The civil strife of the mind here is really revealing. Two choices each with their pros and cons but then passion for another leading to questioning of former safety behaviours - it could be that a soul mate has appeared making the writer question what they truly want in life. Always good when that happens - questions lead to answers and answers lead to illumination of erstwhile dark recesses of the mind. Always good when that happens too..
I like this simple yet complex piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ya i agree with the words . somehow relates with me. I loved the emotions that swimed upon the words beautifully . I liked the meaningful depth , well done !

Posted 9 Years Ago


The title is perfect for this poem, and I could really feel the emotions coming out of every word of this piece. Fantastic job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Shadow of Death

Little Rock, AR



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