What is age but a number?

What is age but a number?

A Poem by Shadow
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About how unfair it is to have restrictions just because of age.

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What is Age but a number? 

To show how long we have lived...

Why are there rules

to pick who we should be with...

And who we should go with?

Why do we need those

rules when age is only a number?

Why are there restrictions to

Those who want to just be

Wth someone they really cherish?

Isn't age just a number?

A number to count

How long we have lived for?

And how long we have left?

Why is age important?

Why does age have rules?

When we are  all

The same on the inside...

What is age but a number?

© 2009 Shadow


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Totally agree! I find myself being taken less seriously because of my age- espacially with my writing. I don't mean to sound like an arrogant cow, but there are people on here three times my age who don't write as well as me. My family and friends often say that I'm a forty-year-old trapped in a teenager's body.

I think age should be measured on maturity. I mean, there are fifty-year-olds in the world that are less mature than someone sixteen.

But on to your writing: I loved the flow! Nice rhythm and very well-written.

Best of luck with your future writing! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Totally agree! I find myself being taken less seriously because of my age- espacially with my writing. I don't mean to sound like an arrogant cow, but there are people on here three times my age who don't write as well as me. My family and friends often say that I'm a forty-year-old trapped in a teenager's body.

I think age should be measured on maturity. I mean, there are fifty-year-olds in the world that are less mature than someone sixteen.

But on to your writing: I loved the flow! Nice rhythm and very well-written.

Best of luck with your future writing! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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