Sleeping

About someone who is alone.

Sleeping in this hollow place.

This is my secret escape.

No light can shine through.

No voice can be heard.

I am alone.

All alone in this hollow place.

No one can find me.

No one can see me 

Or even hear me.

I just fade into this secret place.

My mind feels heavy altogether though.

Don't misunderstand me.

I am not running away from my problems only from him.

I gave him my hand now I am all his.

He said he would never leave me I beileved him...

I beileved such false lies...

He left and came back...

He left and came back...

He left...

He came back..

Saying that he would never leave.

Saying such lies.

He left for the last time and is never coming back.

So I sleep in this hollow secert place.

Awaiting for his return.

Knowing he won't come back.

Author's Note

Yes lines are supposed to repeat no it wasn't a mistake. Review nicely please! You can criticize but nicely please! I am very sensitive about my writing. ^_^

Reviews

[NightDream]

Hmm reminds me of a few bad relationships. you did a good job of setting the mood, it created negative, isolate, and depression. I think I'll go eat a big bowl of Ice Cream. Great work