Giving In

Burning tears

Refuse to fall

Causing nothing but pain

Nearly choking me

Why did you believe her

Why did you listen

Why did you think you could love her

When she doesn't even care for you

Go away

Leave me be

I want to be alone

Where no one can see

Hush, my daughter

Listen to me

Push her away as she did you

Show her the pain you bear

You're right for once

Once blind I now see

I'm coming with you

I'm through with her game and lies

Come my daughter

Be with me

I'll wipe your tears

I'll set your heart free

Reviews

[Richard Patrick]

Reveting. You have a passion with word. My friend. How I met my love, was by giving her a letter with my poetry in it. Than I just talked with her. Relax, she this person you want. Has to know more about you than your looks. What makes you interested in her? Why is she so, appealing to you? You see this in her.

[Lucifer, The Royal King Of Hell]

I find this hard to admit, but I have no words to describe her. She's just perfect in a way that's hard to describe. It's so strange, I admit. That's a bad thing, I think. But I don't know, I could be wrong.

[Ellen Kolman]

once again...brilliant....excellent poem; great write....carry on