Hello

Hello,

 

What a peculiar day.

 

The sun is shining,

the rays nearly blinding.

 

All I can do is smile.

 

With joy my heart will fill,

oh my, what a thrill!

 

It is a new day.

 

Only then is it clear,

that all I feel is fear.

 

What a horrible time.

 

It's a terrible day,

though it's sad to say.

 

Goodbye.

Author's Note

*shrugs* I don't even know.

Reviews

[Érenn]

Again just my take on this. It goes without saying the narrator here is pretty happy as the day begins, well most probably thinking it's a new day a new beginning. Unfortunately the past doesn't leave one behind easily. It haunts one in the present time. The day supposedly bright and sunny feels as bland and cold as a night in a blizzard. Hiding seems to be the next step. The Goodbye seems to indicate not wanting to interact with the day or people. Again just my take. This had more of a monologue feel. Thank you for sharing ^^

[Obscured by the Shadows]

It's like I made you in a computer...

[Érenn]

Aah well I will take that as a compliment, ^^ And I think it's easy to read someone like me. I do not sound that mysterious now do I?

[Obscured by the Shadows]

You just sound like you know my mind haha.

[hcarson]

Once again, something we can all relate to. Wake up happy, optimistic at the start of a new day just to realise all our issues and problems have followed us and nothing has changed..same sxxt different day, optimism gone with the realisation..thats how i read it anyway. I like it ..thank you for sharing,good work.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you for taking the time to read it.

[Inject Positivity]

sun shines with new hope and happiness...the speaker looks happy and smiling with joy in his/her heart... then suddenly it changes when fear comes in his/her mind... all the inspiration and happiness seems bleak.... whoa! you reminded me one of the toughest phase of my life when i went into bed hoping for a new day and then suddenly when i woke up in the morning i hated to leave my bed.... loved it.... 100 ratings with 100 claps....

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you, brother. I am glad I could speak to you on an emotional level.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, this is amazing!!!!!!!! i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thanks :) took a tad bit of thought.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, i see :)

[McBear]

up and down real quick! But I liked it. It really shows how someone can become sad even in the happiest of conditions.