The Snow is Falling

The snow is falling,

you watch and dream.

The future is calling, 

but it's not what it seems.

 

You make a choice,

and follow your heart.

you lose your voice,

and are torn apart.

 

The snow is falling,

you watch and dream.

The future is calling,

but it's not what it seems.

 

You know better now,

and always think first.

You ask yourself how,

you just haven't burst.

 

The snow is falling,

you watch and dream.

The future is calling,

you just want to scream.

Reviews

[Érenn]

Good punch in the end. Also more about decisions and dreams. Whether to follow the heart more or think rationally before taking the next stop. A constant battle between mind and heart. But time doesn't stop so in the end our past mistakes,the dilemma and inability to take the decision causes us to dread the future. ^^ The rhyme scheme as usual is spot on ^^ I like it much Thank you for sharing

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you for reading, it makes me happy that you go through and read my work; you seem to find it very relate-able and understand it better than most of my viewers.

[Érenn]

Well observation helps in finding out those small things hidden in plain sight. They help me figure things out ^^ Thus perceiving the writer's thoughts becomes easier. ^^

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Well you can read y thoughts like an open book, apparently.

[emipoemi]

I have no words....my voice is in my awe! Well done!

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you so much!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Inject Positivity]

well well well!! my sister always bringing up some thought provoking and very relatable pieces of works... this is another one... it makes me think how i feared about my own future and about my dreams... . and i loved it and it shows almost like the words of my heart....beautifully done sis.... full ratings....

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Provocation is something I am good at .. haha

[Junction]

The future is on the horizon for all of us. We have to shape it by our present moments.
Good poem.

[Tomás Ó C..]

We must always meet the future...

[Prantik Ali]

Awesome poem.
The repetition of the snow falling somehow makes it moee mysterious and dark.
Once again, awesome!! :) :) :)

[McBear]

I loved the times where it rhymed and the endless talk about snow. Very beautiful

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thanks Nick :D

[McBear]

Ayye :D My pleasure!

[Crimson Apples]

It was mentioned in the other reviews, but I loved the way you repeated the verse about snow. It made it seem never ending.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Why thank you, every comment, even a small one, is appreciated :D

[Willard Wells]

As I read what was a rather dream sequenced work, it gave me pause. How often can we look upon the first snowfall and watch and not dream as our minds empty of all but the snow dream. Well done.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you very much. I appreciate your open-mindedness

[Meeks]

Great poem. The repetition really helps this piece.
I really enjoyed the second stanza. No one can predict the consequences...

Keep writing, it can only get better!

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you so much :D