*unnamed*

this is basically about the thing people have said about me that hurt me

A sour trail o blood and ink

Line my heart, the broken pieces of love and hate

A watchful eye with make-up and streaks

Eyeliner and shadows all as black as coal

Float in a cloud to judge the pain

 

The laughing mouths happier than mine talking about it about me

As they bury themselves in the lies

A thousand binding coils through my heart

Silver and cold that show the proof of his love

and how it only sticks with me though it was all a lie.

Reviews

[Mirabella]

This is a really good poem! There is something about it.. It is definitely touching. It really makes you think, which is something that makes any poem good. I also admire the emotion you put into it.
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