Alone

Yeah for poetry!

The loneliness I feel,
its like cold ice and steel.
The coldness of one's longing,
it cuts through you like a blade of sorrow.
Ever painful, ever inescapable.
You just want to never see the morrow.

You long to see the light,
of your friends helpful hand.
You wish to feel the warmth,
of that ever glowing land.
A place where you can feel at home,
a place where your heart can stay.
A home in which no fear comes,
nor painful anything.

Loneliness has gone,
and you can see again.
How beautiful life can be,
when your with that special one.

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

it was very sad but also a very good write

[Hailey]

this was great. its sincere and relateable, and it flows great. The imagery and descriptions were awesome, so good job on this

[Danny J.H.]

amen too that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!