Again and Again

Tell me you love me,

Just once more,

Kiss me so gently,

Again and again,

Those softly spoken,

Whispers to me,

That fill me with passion,

So lovingly.

 

Just once more,
Again and again,

Whisper to me,

So lovingly,

Murmur to me,

That you love me.

Author's Note

I think I kinda screwed up on this one. What do you guys think?

Reviews

I dont think you screwed it up at all. There are almost no rules to free verse poetry. ;)
You portray the emotions well. I can feel the passion and the urgency.
Well written!
-ST