Passion. Love. Wonder

 

I take her hand

And hold it tight

One more hug,

One more kiss,

More light

 

Stay with me

And never go

I don't know

What I would do

Without you

 

Your one of a kind

So precious to me

 

When I'm near you I'm

Filled with

Passion.

Love.

and Wonder

 

I'm filled with more

passion

Than ever before

 

I'm filled with more

Love

Than with anyone else

 

I'm filled with more

Wonder

At how two people like us

Hadn't found each other

Sooner

 

I'm filled with

Passion,

Love,

And Wonder

Because

 

I.

Love.

You.

Author's Note

Not my best one (or I don't think its my best).... What do you guys think?

Reviews

[Randal Bright]

Great love poem you have, describing the subtle desperation we all have for someone we love and want them to stay in a time of need and desire. The way you wrote this poem is interesting as it gives emphasis on the feelings that the speaker feels as well as how it has a sort of fragmented feel to it, yet still ordered well. Very interesting and well written poem you have here! I'll read some more of your work! From what I've read so far, it'll be amazing.

[Matthew Kult]

It doesn't have to be the best to get your meaning across. A soft poem for someone which you filled with something from within. That is what a poem is about...not good or bad.

But it was good. Just a simple opinion.