Betrayal...........A last warning

You promised you never hurt me

You said you'd never leave or desert me

After what you've done I'm wishing you  lied

I let you into every part of me

and you burned my foundations

you destroyed my support system like a virus

and you keep me here in your prison to rot afraid to let me go

but you should be more afraid of what will happen if you don't

the anger that grows within me is reaching the boiling point and I can't control it

wait...that's not true I Won't control it i will unleash the full fury of that anger at you

and i afraid of what will happen when i do

so i'm asking you to let me go

forget you knew me and move on to another victim of your charms

your poison has no further effect on me

Now I know what I have to do........

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

Heartbreaking.
One can feel the grip of the captor ever tightening while reading the sorrowful words.
Will you ever be free...
Good write.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

What do you have to do!?!??!?!

I saw my ex-wife as I read this! Very powerful, very emotional and I know as men, it's tough being "there"! And the to get "there" only to be crushed......It's enraging! Great write!

[An owl on the moon]

So powerfully vivid, moving into the depths of pain and love... The bitterness stings and stirs up the poison... Amazing work! Been too long...