My Tossing Dreams

I woke up when the crimson streaks in the sky still looked so lazy,

The night seemed fading, the dawn felt drowsy;

My dreams --- I disappointed ‘him’, still tossing in my brain,

The bed still untamed with emotions, scattered senses censored burden.

My dreams still in lust with me, kissing my lips leaping my heart,

I made love with ‘him’, transmitting hormones, just could not stay apart.

 

I’s dreaming castles in the air, kissing my emotions and ecstasy

I was building up my lost desires, adoring my occult fantasy.

The clamour and the commotion that perturbed the vents of my vein,

That sucked my faculty emoted, and left me numb in sweet pain.

My eyes with ado of dreams that I lost,

I sat up in silence, the dreams, ‘he’ still tossed.

Reviews

[Dayran]

It appears sometimes that the decisions we make in life are so easy and straight forward we can let a kid make them for us. This brings a powerful assurance to us that it is not beyond our ken to take on some very big issues. It is a dress rehearsal. Before long it may offer it to us to do it ourselves. Nice write!

[Kate Moore]

Perfect

[Boldpen]

The imaginary and expressions of this poem grasped me. excellent flow and use of emotions. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great thoughts and emotion in this poem. I like the description and how you expressed the desire and feeling of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[EMMIE]

i like the imagery your words are very deep

[Jordan's Back]

Very nice, :)

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

My dreams still in lust with me, kissing my lips leaping my heart,
I made love with ‘him’, transmitting hormones, just could not stay apart.
...................excellant lines, my best wishes. I like your writings.

[Abd-afeez]

wow! So much with dreams. I love this.

[AK]

That was a nice description.